Revision of my Essay

I need you to do a revision of my essay. I have the last chance to edit it.I got 33 out of 50 and I really need to get a higher grades. I attached my essay’s papers and the pics of the article which is in the book. THIS IS THE STRUCTURE Purpose:To understand an author’s main idea and purpose for work/To recognize the main points that support that main idea/To be able to summarize author’s main ideas/To be able to respond or react to what the author has to say (to support or defend your point of view).Student learning objectives:1. Develop Rhetorical Knowledgea. Focus on rhetorical situation, audience, and purpose.b. Use voice, tone, format, and structure appropriately.c. Write and read texts written in at least one genre for an academic discourse community.d. Learn reflective strategies.2. Develop Experience in Writinga. Learn recursive strategies for generating ideas, revising, editing, and proofreading.b. Learn to critique one’s own work and the work of others.3. Develop Application of Composing Conventionsa. Apply genre conventions, including, structure paragraphing tone mechanics, syntax, and style. b. Use appropriate vocabulary, format, and documentation.4. Develop Critical and Creative Thinkinga. Identify context.b. Present a position.c. Establish a conclusion indicated by the context and that expresses a personal interpretation.Description:Write a Summary/Response.”Keeping Up” pg. 114 JtCSource usage:For this essay, use only the article you choose. Do not use any other sources for this essay as the focus is on summarizing and responding to the chosen article.Documentation format:Please use MLA format. Remember to cite the information both parenthetically and on the Works Cited page. Essays without a Works cited page will not be accepted. To cite the textbook, use “A Work in an Anthology” in theWorks Cited:Books link on the OWL website.https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/06…Grading Rubric:Critical ThinkingCoherenceThesis statement and support 70% of gradeDevelopmentUse of Rhetorical AppealsCorrect integration and citation of sources in textCorrect source formatting in/and Works Cited page 30% of gradeSyntax/grammar/punctuation/mechanicsRemember: • The summary is just that, a summary, so it should be no more than about ¼ of your final summary/response. Your response should be about ¾ of the final summary/response. • You should not present your opinion in the summary at any time—that should be saved for the response. • It is important to present the author’s name and the title of the essay within the first few sentences of the summary. Refer to the author by his/her last name throughout the rest of your sum/res.